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Reflective Essay
Through surveys and research, my group concluded the branding packages would appeal to a 15-24 female primary audience and a 25-34+ secondary mixed audience. To appeal to our primary audience my branding contains a lot of normative representations of femininity. While researching Olivia Rodrigo, her brand had visual leitmotifs (Goodwin’s 6 conventions) such as the colour purple, a butterfly as a recurring symbol and monospaced fonts. When applying this to my own work, I did so through props (butterfly earrings, necklace, butterfly in mise-en-scene), however, I replaced the purple colour with pink and the font with a graffiti font to be in harmony with the visuals of the music video. This pink and graffiti font can be seen on the front panel of the digipak as well as on the social media for the multi-post grid tour promotion poster for example.
A major reason for the primary audience being female is the representations of characters in our music video. Through shot compositions such as rule of thirds, the protagonist is anchored and we follow her hero’s journey (Campbell), however, this is challenged. The events of the video create narrative enigma, blurring the Proppian roles given to OR, the brown-haired version of her from the first minute of the clip presents as a hero and a princess while her pink-haired version presents as the villain or false hero. The preferred reading (Stuart Hall reception theory) is that these two girls are the same person, but it is polysemic as they appear in the same scene, one could accept the oppositional reading that they are separate identities. This polysemy helps to motivate rewatching when there is no new equilibrium (Todorov), which is important as YouTube is currently the largest disruptor streaming platform. The two characters are binary opposites (Levi Strauss) through their appearance and manner. Queer theorist, Judith Butler would argue the brown-haired girl performs normative gender representation as she cries, wears pink and wears tight clothing, she fits the gender stereotype. The members of the girl band challenge this image of femininity, especially our drummer, who wears a grey suit set and sneakers which queers this idea of gender binary and is a counter-type. This shows that despite having a range of representations of femininity they all portray females which means the primary audience will personally identify (Uses + Gratifications) with them more than a male audience. We recognize that our texts are also missing BAME and disabled representation amongst others and our texts would have benefited from more diversity.
As for age, our audience surveys concluded the age demographic ranges from 15-24, we created appeal using specific posters in the mise-en-scene (Taylor Swift, Katy Perry, Kim Petras). For further appeal to this demographic, I sought engagement through a quirky and relatable social media presence. In the Gen Z zeitgeist, its common to see captions written in all lower caps or all caps, hashtags being used, emojis as well as abbreviations and extended words (“sooooo excited”). In the following example the fan account I created says “I love you so much livvy” in abbreviated Teenspeak, OR then replies “I love you more” in its abbreviated version, this fulfils the need for social interactions (uses and gratifications).
This almost hyper-feminine brand limits our primary audience to females, however, to challenge this we included many post-modern, intertextual (Kristeva) references to reach a 4-quadrant audience. This is important as our chosen artist is signed with Geffen Records, a subsidiary of Universal Music Group (a Big 3 vertically integrated conglomerate) which wants to stay mainstream and target a 4-quadrant audience. One of the ways I secure the secondary audience (25-34+ male and female) is by inserting easter eggs (Altman’s intellectual puzzles) such as a reference to Elvis Costello when the lyric “Enjoy your youth” plays, this is because Brutal is a sample of Costello’s Pump It Up. If the preferred reading is picked up on, it will boost their cultural capital (Bourdieu) within the subculture. Another use of subculture codes is the punk signifiers in pink-haired OR’s costume such as Doc Martin boots and a spiked collar, this could be nostalgic for the secondary audience as the punk subculture movement was most popular in the 70s. This is further emphasised with the post-modern use of an analogue TV and the simulacrum of content playing from it is a recurring visual throughout my 3 products, (the tour dates on my Instagram, the back panel of my digipak and the kitchen scene of the music video). After analysing Olivia Rodrigo’s own socials, I noticed her appearing in media with older demographics (Rolling Stone, Vogue) I used a Rolling Stone magazine as promotion for the album on my Instagram, this is an additional signifier that OR can appeal to an older audience.
The feminist theorist Laura Mulvey’s argument would mention that the OR character’s short skirt, low cut top, makeup, and certain scenes (the splash scene and the licking the U cupcake) appeal to the male gaze, which would also appeal to a heterosexual male audience as it is prioritising their consumption. However, an effort was made to avoid prioritising the male perspective here, there are almost no male figures for males to personally identify with (Uses and gratifications theory), in most the social media posts OR is showing very little skin (often wearing a mesh t-shirt or a long sleeve), avoids direct gaze or parted lips in the digipak and therefore rarely appeals to the male gaze. On the other hand, the post-feminist argument would state that the female character has agency and choices like the low-cut top and makeup are her own and she may feel empowered by this portrayal, (we observed the Sinead O’Connor and Miley Cyrus dispute).
When researching conventions of music video, we looked at Frith’s theory of concept (Depeche Mode - Never Let Me Down Again), narrative (Rude - Magic!) and performance (Guns N’ Roses - Sweet). This sparked the idea for the narrative of the music video, despite Vernallis arguing that music video is too elliptical of a format for a whole narrative, our music video has undeniable narrative features. This is conventional for the genre we identified OR as: dark pop. Research on pop music videos showed a lot of narrative (Katy Perry – Hot n’ Cold) even sometimes taking codes from other industries such as film which shows the increasing convergence of industries. However, we challenged a major convention of music video: instruments in two major ways. The first was by including a performance element to a dark pop song, which is unconventional as the rise of digitisation causes a decrease in the need for instruments (especially in pop) and therefore our inclusion of it is challenging the convention. Another way we challenged music video conventions was through a deconstructionist and playful approach, we used Guitar Hero instruments as a simulacrum of real instruments.
To monetise with less conglomerate interference, alternative videos have become a meaningful convention in the music industry (U2 created 3 videos for the song One), I researched lyric videos from the dark pop genre (Olivia Rodrigo, Sabrina Carpenter) and created my own. I adopted the paper texture that I often saw in lyric videos while keeping the same visual leitmotifs (pink, sans serif font) to maintain branding. Lyric videos are also often made as user generated content, which shows the impact of digitisation and web 2.0 (O’Reilly, Gillmor).
A repeated theme throughout my digipak, social media and music video is the relationship to eating, this is a social issue that affects many of the primary audience which makes it a relevant issue to tackle. It’s also conventional to see these themes being raised within the dark pop genre, for example, I looked at Melanie Martinez’s Strawberry Shortcake which deals with eating issues. Andrew Goodwin’s 6 conventions also include the notion of looking which is applied throughout my texts as OR watches herself in the mirror and appears in a TV, this symbolises and amplifies (Goodwin) the lyric “I hate the way I’m perceived” which links to body image issues. My Instagram bio says, “food is way cheaper than therapy”, the front panel of the digipak has a cake and OR looking down, unsatisfied which could connote eating issues however it’s polysemic, additionally, in the music video the cake is licked, crushed but never eaten which would have similar connotations. The choice of the album title being Brutal also comes into play as it summarises the tweenager struggle, with this OR serves as a Hero (Propp) to the teenage girls experiencing similar (as seen in lyrics “I wish I could disappear”) ideas. This is evidenced in a post captioned “have ur 3 meals a day” as if OR is taking on the influential role, I also used the hashtag “foodstagram” inspired by RAYE who has entire post highlights about food.
Music Video Final Cut and alt vids
IN THIS POST:
- Final cut
- Alt vid 1: Lyric video
- Alt vid 2: Lyric video (fan-made)
Digipak: drafts and final text
IN THIS POST:
- Final Digipak
- Front panel, spine, sticker, inner pannels
- Drafts
- Drafts reflections
- Summary of evolution
FRONT PANEL:
The spine takes after one of the recurring brand colours (a deep mauvy pink) and, for the title, a recurring brand font: the graffiti font. I added the name of the artist in all caps (for emphasis) in the 3rd font I used, a simple sans serif that is unique but basic and easily legible. Finally in the same sans serif font, I wrote a serial number for verisimilitude.
SUMMARY OF EVOLUTION:
- Pink branding not made clear enough with images selected
- Font wasn't coherent with dark pop genre
- No space for track-list
- Lack of stickers and certain logos
- OR not centrally frames or too small on image
DRAFTS:
I created a digipak with 2 inner panels and 2 outer panels.
DRAFT 1:
DRAFT 2:
Reflection on 2nd draft:
DRAFT 3:
The main issues with this third draft is the back panel still has a messy track-list, this is mainly amplified by the HAPPY BIRTHDAY banner in the background which is taking up too much space in the image. The compact disc logo is still missing.
The spine still has the bubble letters which I realised was not in concordance with the pop genre, it was also too childish and leaning too far into our younger audience while neglecting the older audience. Another major issue was that the OR character was too small on the front panel, in addition, an outside hand could be seen in the image. There was also a lens glare coming from the candles which is undesirable.
Social media: drafts and final text
- Social media posts with inspirations and justifications
- Images of final product
- OMG: oh my god/gosh
- luv: love
- ilysm: I love you so much
- ilym: I love you more
- smth: something
- 4: for
- 2: to
- w/W : with
- TYSM: thank you so much
- my loves
- ml: my love
- y'all
- u/U: you
- ur: your/you're
- pics: pictures
- wanna
- ahhhhh
- soooo
- videoooo
- ur girl
- ty: thank you
- so so so much
- u guyzzz
- literally
Video sample/rough cuts
IN THIS POST: SAMPLE SCENES, TESTING TECHNIQUES ON FCPX AND ROUGH CUTS:
- Sample scenes 1-6
- Fcpx testing
- Rough cuts 1-4
- Lyric video
1. Sample Scene 1:The bullying video:
Not permanent location, likely in a bathroom with blue stalls (more stereotypical and aesthetically pleasing). We will use slow mo and jump cuts to exaggerate the action and well as post production edits to make it punchy. The verse is also very short so minimal lip syncing to properly convey the narrative. In this sample, it isn't very obvious but there are two characters who will be dressed differently with extreme makeup on one and not the other. The two characters should be binary opposites of each other.
- Using the music for action to fall on beat
- Cut zooms
- Layering boots
- Rewind / reverse movements
- Punchier editing
- Fix frame cuts (framing changes with jump cuts)
- Speed up to slow mo
- More stages of jump cut
- Cut from wet to pour and back
- Jump zooms
- Comic book effect for big expressions
- Finger lick is effective
The journey
7th December: Bedroom scene
8th December: Cake scene
19th December: Bathroom scene
29th December: Performance scene
CHALLENGES & ADAPTATION:
1. Challenge:
Transporting all instruments (including full drum kit) into the graffiti location. We realised we would need a parent to drive us to the location with a trailer, the only one with a trailer was my family but the drum kit was at LK's. This meant a lot of planning and relying on others to manage with our schedule.
One of the options we came up with was to go to LK's house as she was the one with the drum kit and filming in the garage. However this created more issues as it's difficult to set dress this location, we would also lose the graffiti aspect that we wanted to keep. In addition getting artificial lighting in the garage would mean buying studio LEDs and waiting for them to arrive. This is why we dropped this idea.
Solution:
I own a guitar, a drum kit and a microphone from the Xbox 360's Guitar Hero games, these simulacrum of instruments are way smaller and easily fit in the trunk of my father's car. It also adds a playful deconstructionist element to the music video.
2. Challenge:
Come the week of the shoot we saw that heavy rain was predicted for the day of the shoot, not only this but the location was closed to the public on our alternate days. This caused us to need to think of alternatives ideas for the shoot.
We used a green screen to test if we could green screen ourselves into the location shots we had taken when location scouting. This sparked the idea to take inspiration from the Girls and Boys - Blur music video.
Solution:
In this case we got very lucky to find another day with minimal rain and open hours for the location. It was a shorter shoot than any of the other ones as it was scheduled very late and the group had personal plans that day.
3. Challenge:
The day of the Bathroom scene shoot, OP fell ill and was not present. We had no room to reschedule, especially because we needed permissions from a range of people to even use the school bathroom. Her absence also meant we did not have key props that we needed the day of the shoot.
Solution:
LK and I had to run to the grocery store and find the closest thing to a red liquid as possible. We used supplies from the school for the cup and cleanup. We used Raspberry Oasis soda which was a nightmare to clean up but necessary for our schedule to work.
4. Challenge:
To record in the school bathrooms we needed to film after school so no students come in, but we still needed supervision from someone capable of first aid as by being in the school we are their responsibility. It was very challenging to get permission from everyone who may be involved, to find a willing female supervisor and a date that would be convenient for all.
Solution:
After days of planning and asking we managed to get permission to record in the primary bathroom under the supervision of the nurse.
5. Challenge:
For the birthday scene, we needed a cake that would look identical in all shots no matter whats done to it, for continuity reasons. However, we also wanted some messy shots as well as OR stabbing the cake on beat with "I'm so sick of 17".
Solution:
We created the cake out of paste and spackle so it doesn't move, we let go of the idea of stabbing the cake and we baked cupcakes with the title "BRUTAL" written on top with icing.
CHALLENGES - SMALL:
- forgot to bring a stool for drummer, had to use a cement block we found at location
- did not know we needed a tool to open spray paint cans so had to struggle with keys (big loss of scheduled time)
- ran out of icing
- the mirror lip syncing
- walking in front of graffiti walls
- smushing cake on face
- matched cut from bedroom to kitchen
- TV lip sync and editing of the last lines (pace change)
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